Ben TS # 6 (b)

Date/time: Friday, 02/07/2021 from 1:30 to 2:35

Mariama Yoshiko

Location: ZOOM

Topic/skills: Essay writing, piece by piece: thesis statement, transition words, sentence structure+organization

feedback: Overall, Mariama would need to ameliorate her ability to produce concise and coherent sentences. The words are there, and the ideas are clear, but writing them down may be challenging for Mariama. 

Learned: I learned how to correct mistakes after she's done writing, so that I don't interrupt. I am still working on my abilities to give constructive feedback.

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